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Admire--
the halcyon of wind carries
industrial merchants
away from golden acres
on which blossoms my treasure
bush-cradled until prosperity.

Listen--
the hush valley whispers
poetry under sheets
necking a residuum evenfall
in which our ghosts remain
kissing strawberries by sunset.
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Given 2009-02-16
It is difficult to find just one memorable poem in this deviants poetry gallery, but there was just something that drew me to this one. Strawberries By Sunset. by =M-PlayC3ll, has the magic and intrigue that I feel a poem of this caliber should have, so go read and allow the words to stay with you for a while. This lovely poetic offering was also suggested by: VampiricKitsuneKit ( Suggested by !MerelyMarquis and Featured by `LadyLincoln )
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`leoraigarath Jul 12, 2009  Professional Writer
I don't have much to say but a beautiful and touching poem. Lean on the punctuation and doesn't feel like its missing, solid structure, strong feel - everything a good poem has. Beautiful.
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*mixdown Jul 18, 2009   Photographer
Thank you very much. :) Means a lot to me.
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Lovely! Full of old world, dreamy glory enhanced by a unique juxtaposition of words and an impactful form; your rich imagery and stunning diction makes for a powerful poem. :heart:
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*mixdown Feb 24, 2009   Photographer
That's greatly appreciated. :)
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~tinyplaidninja Feb 16, 2009  Student Writer
Really beautiful. Congrats on the DD!
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*mixdown Feb 17, 2009   Photographer
Thank you.
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~tinyplaidninja Feb 17, 2009  Student Writer
:)
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*mixdown Feb 17, 2009   Photographer
:heart:
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~cassiedj Feb 16, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Again, congrats on the DD, Max! I always liked this poem of yours. :)
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