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February 16, 2009
It is difficult to find just one memorable poem in this deviants poetry gallery, but there was just something that drew me to this one. Strawberries By Sunset. by =M-PlayC3ll, has the magic and intrigue that I feel a poem of this caliber should have, so go read and allow the words to stay with you for a while. This lovely poetic offering was also suggested by: VampiricKitsuneKit
Featured by LadyLincoln
Suggested by MerelyMarquis
Literature Text
Admire--
the halcyon of wind carries
industrial merchants
away from golden acres
on which blossoms my treasure
bush-cradled until prosperity.
Listen--
the hush valley whispers
poetry under sheets
necking a residuum evenfall
in which our ghosts remain
kissing strawberries by sunset.
the halcyon of wind carries
industrial merchants
away from golden acres
on which blossoms my treasure
bush-cradled until prosperity.
Listen--
the hush valley whispers
poetry under sheets
necking a residuum evenfall
in which our ghosts remain
kissing strawberries by sunset.
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I don't have much to say but a beautiful and touching poem. Lean on the punctuation and doesn't feel like its missing, solid structure, strong feel - everything a good poem has. Beautiful.